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Asynchronous Office Hours include a high-level review of one essay, where I record and send a screenshare video giving you feedback on your essay. The recording will be around 20 minutes. The feedback will focus on what about your essay is working well and what can be improved. This will be a high-level review and will include some minor writing/grammar tips, but not a detailed proofread.
The difference between regular Office Hours and Asynchronous Office Hours are that they are NOT at a scheduled time with a back and forth conversation. Instead, you will receive your feedback via a recording sent by email. You will receive your feedback in 1-3 days. If you have a Dec 15th deadline, make sure you send me your essay no later than Dec 11th (sooner if possible) so you have enough time to incorporate feedback.
Lauren has more than 10-years of experience in reviewing college essays, scholarship essays, prestigious award essays, and grant applications. Lauren has been awarded over $4 Million in scholarships and grants, and has helped dozens of students be accepted at top universities. Lauren has also served on a UC Berkeley college admissions committee, selection committees for prestigious fellowship programs, and reviewed grant applications as a former program officer. She has a keen eye for what makes an essay or proposal stand out from the pack. Lauren is also the founder of WinAFulbright.com.
You will receive one-round of high-level feedback with a 20-minute recorded video. This does not include a grammatical proofread.
